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<p rend="noCount">British Library Add. MS 28265 ff. 48-49, in place of lines 1-42 of Book I of the 1811 first edition:</p>
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<l rendition="#indent5"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">(Uley. Aug 7. 1807)</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent4"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">(From Uley to Ross)</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">Time was but young, the earth was gay</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent3">&lt;When Time's young curls embower'd his brow&gt;</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">And infant streams began to play &lt;flow&gt;,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">When</del> &lt;Huge giant&gt; Scoop <del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">the Giant</del> &lt;with&gt; with spade in hand,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">And all the Island at command,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">With puffing breath and monstrous stride</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">Came thundering on by Severn's side.</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">Fancy still hears his foot rebound,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">For</del> &lt;When&gt; <emph>Stinchcombe</emph> trembled at the sound.</l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">Where</del> &lt;Here&gt; Cambrian mountains caught his eye</l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">He gnash'd his teeth in jealousy</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">And xxxxx xxxxxx xxxx</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">Exclaim'd 'there shall be just such here.'</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent3">&lt;Towring to meet the distant sky</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">Jealous he mark'd them one by one</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">And dreading <del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">much to be</del> sore the work out-done</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">'Out-done' he cried, 'Tis true I'm warm'</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">But this bright prospect nerves my arm</l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">He shall be strong who calls me</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent3">I too the mountain pile can rear</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">Outdone, there shall be just such here.'&gt;</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">Then stript at once to set about it,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">(Look at the spot and who can doubt it,)</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">But, at the moment he was speaking</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">His <del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">arms</del> &lt;limbs&gt; were stiff, his back was aching,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">For <emph>Mendip</emph>, and the western shore,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">The marks of <del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">his huge</del> &lt;recent&gt; labours bore:</l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">So, wearily, and</del> &lt;Weary he rested,&gt; full of pain,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">By <emph>Nympsfield</emph>, on the upland plain,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">He set them down with an envious smile</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent3">&lt;And with a gnashing envious smile&gt;</l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">And</del> &lt;There&gt; stuck his spade upright the while,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">And chang'd his mind.<del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">—There</del> &lt;<del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">But</del> Then&gt; spurning first,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">O'er Severn's Vale a cloud of dust,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">Again he pluck'd it from the ground,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">The crumbling earth flew wizzing round;</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">Then dashing sternly to and fro,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">And</del> &lt;He&gt; cut a casual hole or two;</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">In one of which (a sweet one truly)</l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">Pigmies now dwell and call it Uley</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent3">&lt;Some modern pigmies built up Uley&gt;;</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">And <emph>Owlpen</emph>, by the dark wood side,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">Which none can find without a guide.</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">And here, the happy natives stroll</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">Around their green illshapen Bowl,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">A Bowl all zigzagg'd round about</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">With one large gap to let them out.</l>
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<l rendition="#indent5">Twas from that very gap we started,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">Four Female <del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">Tourists</del> &lt;travelers,&gt; merry hearted,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">Of <del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">charm, of power, of will</del> &lt;ample powers, of charms&gt; possest</l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">To cheer the souls of all the rest,</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent3">&lt;Joy to insure to all the rest&gt;</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">Prepared to wonder, and to caper,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">And bring all Wales home—upon paper;</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">With five <del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">companions in a row</del> &lt;protectors, healthful, strong,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">And cheerful as the days were long</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">To point out beauties, stones, and more;</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">To hold the reins,&gt; <del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">and guide the prow</del> &lt;—and pay the score;&gt;</l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">Xxx</del> &lt;And&gt; one, <del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">aye one</del> &lt;<del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">xxx</del> besides&gt;, in idle trim</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">Rode just where they would carry him,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">And noted down a thing or two,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">As having nothing else to do.</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">So hark ye Candor, stand you by him,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">Truth shall direct, and joy shall try him;</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">And you keep even, father <emph>Time</emph>,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">The light-horse gallop of his rhime;</l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">That gaily, lightly, run or fly,</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">Shall move unclog'd by history</del></l>
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<l rendition="#indent3">In spirits high, and happy hour,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">Left Stinchcombe Hill</del> &lt;Uley we left&gt;, and Dursley tower</l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">Stinchcomes hill black that seems to stride</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">In conscious bulk towards the Tide</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">And Berkeley's old baronial pride</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">With blood of Englands Monarch died</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent3">&lt;And Stinchcombe<del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">'s black</del> hill that seems to stride</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">Towards Old Oceans furious tide</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">That inward roars <del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">while foaming by</del> &lt;with matchless power&gt;</l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">Of roaring Severn&gt;</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent3">Where blood-staind Barkley's <del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">banners fly</del> &lt;turrets lowr&gt;</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">[continues from line 43 of Book I of the 1811 first edition]</l>
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<p rend="noCount">British Library Add. MS 28265 f. 50, between lines 74 and 75 of Book I of the 1811 first edition:</p>
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<l rendition="#indent3">An ugly Town, and those who chuse it,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">May stop on purpose to abuse it,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">But, being neither tired nor cross,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">We smiled, and drove away for Ross.</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">The Malvern Hills, at times descried,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">The rock-bell on 'the Bailey's side,'</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">And Penyard <del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">Xxxx</del> &lt;<del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">brow</del> Hill,&gt; whose steeps are found</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">By one vast wood begirt around,</l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">A Farm enclosing on its brow,</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">Where never sparrow from below</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent2">2d	<del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">Was, in its confines heard or seen,</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent2">1st	<del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">Check'd by its upright walls of green</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent3">High beat each heart with strong desire</l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">And expectation's</del> &lt;Each prospect fan'd the&gt; kindling fire</l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">Forward allready could employ</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent3"><del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">The morrow's sun in varying joy</del></l>
<l rendition="#indent3">Till expectation led away</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">&lt;In <del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">With</del>&gt; In rapture <del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">xxxxed</del> &lt;<del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">gaze</del> viewd&gt; the unborn day.</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">Not that the scene around was lost</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">Twas vegitation's bravest&lt;<del rend="strikethrough" hand="#dhl">xxxx</del>&gt;  boast</l>
<l rendition="#indent3">Full, and oermeasure, round us lay</l>
<l rendition="#indent2">Qu	Fix'd hills and one that ran away.*</l>
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