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John
Clare's "Domestic
Tree":
Freedom and Home
in "The
Fallen Elm"
Timothy
Ziegenhagen,
Northland College
Introduction
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A
complex
expression
of loss
and anger,
John Clare's
poem "The
Fallen
Elm" speaks
to
feelings
of
powerlessness
in
the
face
of
unchecked
economic
greed. Parliamentary
enclosure
and the
development
of new,
scientifically-based
agricultural
practices
(like crop
rotation)
changed
the face
of the poet's
native Helpston
landscape.
In an effort
to boost
agricultural
efficiency
and to increase
profits,
large landowners
leveled
hills, rechannelled
streams,
and put
up fences,
growing
hedgerows,
and putting
common lands
under the
plow. While "The
Fallen Elm" describes
the
hidden
costs
of the
loss
of
a single
tree,
it also
explores
the
misuse
of
the
rhetoric
of
freedom
towards
the
privatization
of
the
common
lands
through
parliamentary
enclosure.
What
was
really
lost
as
the
result
of
this
dispossession?
How
can
enclosure
in
Clare's
time
connect
with
the
drive
towards
privatization
(of
water
rights,
of
intellectual
property,
of
genetic
codes)
in our
own?
How
can
the
loss
of
a beloved
landscape
affect
one's
sense
of local
history?
By
exploring
these
connections,
students
can
come
to
a more
full
understanding
of
the
complexity
of
Clare's
great
protest
poem.
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There
are
two
steps
an instructor
might
take
when
introducing
students
to
the
sense
of
loss
pervading
the
first
section
of "The
Fallen Elm." Using
Clare's
poem as
a touchstone,
the instructor
might lead
students
in an analysis
of the intimate
connections
they form
with very
particular
natural
landmarks
(trees climbed,
caves explored),
helping
them to
consider
more generally
the ramifications
of this
intimacy.
Such an
exploration
will help
students
better understand
Clare's
unique sense
of place,
how the
poet's understanding
of "home" encompasses
a nascent
ecological
point of
view. An
instructor
might also
explore
the more
overt political
content
of "The
Fallen Elm," which
includes
a fierce
condemnation
of the rhetoric
of freedom;
this rhetoric
seeks to
legitimize
the destruction
of the natural
world and
the enslavement
of the rural
poor. Modern
students
of Clare's
work coming
from rural
areas near
large cities—areas
transformed
from farmland
into sprawling
suburban
housing
developments—are
quick to
make connections
between
the enclosure
so vividly
depicted
in Clare's
poems and
the rapid "Californication" (to
use
an Edward
Abbeyism)
taking
place
in
their
own
backyards.
The
descriptions
of
change
brought
about
by the
agricultural
revolution
in
nineteenth-century
England
may
speak
to
their
own
experiences,
in
which
Walmart
and
large
box
retailers
appear
in the
midst
of
cornfields,
and
rapid
suburban
development
swallows
up
family-owned
century
farms.
I.
The Fallen
Elm: The
Loss of
an Intimate
Landmark
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In
recent years,
much has
been written
about how
Clare's
poems reflect
a proto-environmental
awareness
of natural
systems
(see McKusick's Green
Writing as
well as
Bate's The
Song of
the Earth).
Margaret
Grainger's
edition
of
the
poet's
natural
history
writings
show
his
interest
in
depicting
nature
in prose
as well
as in
poetry;
impressed
by
the
writings
of
Gilbert
White,
Clare
hoped
to record
the
natural
phenomena
he
saw
in the
fields
around
Helpston,
the
small
Northamptonshire
town
in which
he lived.
So precise
were
Clare's
observations
as
a naturalist
that
Edmund
Gosse
complained
the
poet "was
a camera,
not a mind," suggesting
that he
viewed Clare's
work as
a collection
of static
images,
frozen in
time (qtd.
in Storey
17). The
essence
of Clare's
poetry,
however,
is movement,
flux, process.
Every new
observation—a
newly-discovered
orchid variety,
for example—affects
how Clare
perceives
the world
around him,
and he delights
in chronicling
a world
that changes
from one
moment to
the next.
John Barrell
shows that
in relation
to the highly-structured
visual landscapes
of eighteenth-century
nature poetry,
Clare "developed
a whole
aesthetic
of disorder" (152)
in which
the descriptive
elements
of a poem
are "parts
of
the
same
complex
impression,
not
just
this and that,
but this while that" (157).
An
ecologist
by
informal
experience
and
careful
observation,
Clare
describes
not
only
a particular
place,
but
a particular
place
at a
unique
moment
in time,
under
distinct,
novel
conditions.
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Clare's
natural
history
writings
are
astonishing
for
their
clarity
of
perception
and
their
objective—one
even might
say scientific—way
in which
the poet
records
what he
observes.
These descriptions
of natural
phenemona
are not
static,
and he excels
at "utilizing
the kinetic
elements
inherent
in the picturesque
vision.
. . . Clare
not only
admits more
detail into
his work
than most
of his predecessors,
he is also
aware that
those details
are in constant
mutation" (Brownlow
116). Clare's
kinetic
descriptions
reflect
living landscapes,
made up
of dynamic
ecosystems,
changing
weather
patterns,
human and
animal activities,
plant growth
and decay.
His constant—and,
some might
say, obsessive—rewriting
of local
scenes,
bird species,
and plants
evidences
his view
of nature
in flux,
in need
of continual "updating."
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To
give
a sense
of
the
kinetic
movement
in
Clare's
work,
the
instructor
might
find
it
useful
to
center
early
discussions
around
how
the
poet "looks" at
the natural
world. Students
could be
asked to
list the
things that
Clare sees
in his poems,
but also
what he
doesn't
see: Which
images stick
out, and
which are
absent?
What metaphors
does Clare
use, and
how do these
metaphors
work to
make the
reader see
natural
phenomena
in new ways?
Nature writing
tends to
emphasize
the visual,
so students
can be asked
to analyze
the "camera
eye" of
the writer;
such class
discussions
can be speculative
(especially
if students
have training
in film
theory!),
but they
can also
help students
begin to
understand
how Clare's
poems emphasize
natural
systems
from one
poem to
the next—like
a series
of windows
framing
dynamic
images of
the natural
world. It's
useful to
look at
bundles
of related
poems to
build on
this sense:
an exploration
of three
bird poems
together
demonstrates
Clare's "thick" description
of habitat,
how he portrays
instinctual
behaviors,
the look
of a crow
as it crosses
the afternoon
sky.
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Clare's
writings
display
his
strong
emotional
attachment
to
the
landscape
surrounding
Helpston,
a "rootedness" (no
pun intended)
and an awareness "of
the relation
of all creatures
to a habitat
in which
the human
observer
is also
implicated" (McKusick
80). To
quote Edward
Storey, "Clare's
contact
with the
land was
a physical
one" (51).
Such a connection
is intimate,
based on
a day-to-day
familiarity
with a place,
which is
really the
sum of its
natural
processes:
The loss
of a single
life has
a negative
impact on
the entire
system,
which becomes
less diverse
(and less
resilient). While
Clare was
obviously
no ecologist
in the modern
sense—the
term ecology
itself wouldn't
even be
coined till
after his
death—he
nevertheless
had
a clear,
intuitive
sense
of the
value
of
a diverse
ecosystem,
and
he could
be
very
protective
of
animals,
trees,
streams,
and
even
landforms.
In
a letter
to
his
publisher
John
Taylor
in
1821,
Clare
expresses
his
grief
at
the
impending
loss
of a
pair
of old
elm
trees
growing
near
his
cottage:
my
two
favorite
Elm
trees
at
the
back
of
the
hut
are
condemned
to
dye
it shocks
me but
tis
true
the
saveage
who
owns
them
thinks
they
have
done
their
best & now
he wants
to make
use of the
benefits
he can get
from selling
them—O
was this
country
Egypt & was
I but a
caliph the
owner shoud
loose his
ears for
his arragant
presumption & the
first wretch
that buried
his axe
in their
roots shoud
hang on
their branches
as a terror
to the rest—I
have been
several
mornings
to bid them
farewell—had
I £100
to spare
I would
buy their
reprieves—but
they
must
dye.
. .
. (qtd.
in
Bate
172)
Clare's
shock
at the
loss
of
the
two
elms
is heightened
by
the
injustice
of
their
deaths.
Like
an innocent
man
standing
on
the
gallows,
the
trees
are "condemned" to
die and
past "reprieve";
they must
be cut because
the owner
wants the "benefits" of "selling
them." Their
usefulness
to birds,
or to humans
desiring
shade, is
not considered.
Such a domestic
function
is un-enclosable,
and Clare's
own emotional
connection
to these
trees—while
quite powerful—counts
for nothing
on a balance
sheet. The
poet's fantasy
of cropping
the ears
of the "wretch" who
would
chop
down
the
trees
underscores
the
illegality
of
the
act
and
links
chopping
trees
with
counterfeiting:
Clare
here
suggests
that
the
tree
has
some
essential
(and
unenclosable)
value
that
has
been
stolen
by its
greedy,
coining
owner.
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Clare's "The
Fallen Elm" memorializes
a beloved
tree and
exposes
the injustice
perpetrated
by an economic
system that
ignores
its ecological—one
could say
its domestic—value,
requiring
it
be cut
down.
By making
the
tree
a part
of
his
family,
Clare
argues
for
a new
relationship
between
humans
and
living
things,
all
part
of
a continuous
ecological
whole.
The
opening
lines
of the
poem
beautifully
portray
the
tree
as
it leans
closely
over
Clare's
cottage,
protecting
the
poet
and
his
family
and
offering
a kind
of gentle
companionship:
Old
elm that
murmured
in our chimney
top
The
sweetest anthem autumn ever
made
And
into mellow whispering calms
would drop
When
showers fell on thy many-coloured
shade
And
when dark tempests mimic thunder
made
While
darkness came as it would
strangle light
With
the black tempest of a winter
night
That
rocked thee like a cradle
to thy root,
How
did I love to hear the winds
upbraid
Thy
strength without—while
all within was mute.
It
seasoned comfort to our hearts'
desire,
We
felt thy kind protection like
a friend
And
edged our chairs up closed
to the fire,
Enjoying
comforts that was never penned.
(lines 1-14)
The
lush
consonance
in
this
passage
evokes
a kind
of Keatsian,
luxurious
ease
(especially
when
read
aloud).
Indeed,
Clare's
letter
to Taylor
about
the
condemned
elms
was
written
around
the
time
that
Clare
heard
of
Keats's
death
in Italy,
and
one
wonders
if
the
sonorous,
Keatsian
qualities
in
the
above
lines
represent
a kind
of subtle
elegy.
The
domestic
images
in the
poem's
first
thirty-six
lines
underscore
the
fact
that
the
tree
gives
both
protection
and
comfort;
the
soft
murmur
through
the
chimney
links
the
elm
to tender
(and
attentive)
parental
care,
a detail
Clare
reinforces
by
depicting
the
tree
as
a "cradle," a
safe place
protecting
the human
family from
the violence
of the elements.
The elm
is nature's "domestic
tree" (line
18); its "homely
bower" (line
21) attracts
children,
who build "playhouse
rings of
sticks and
stone" (line
24) under
its protective
branches.
Social psychologist
M. Kirkby
has researched
the attraction
of children
to the canopies
of trees,
which provide
a kind of
refuge associated
with the
safety of
a home environment
(1-12).
Indeed,
Clare's
pun on the
word homely—with
connotations
of simplicity
and the
domestic—connects
the elm
in an intimate
way with
the poet's
own cottage,
so that
tree and
home become
inextricably
associated.
The loss
of the tree,
Clare suggests,
is intensely
personal,
a "domestic" loss—a
death
in the
family.
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Part
of the
tree's
power
is its
tough
longevity—it
is the "sacred
dower" of "time" (line
17)
(again,
one
is
reminded
of
Keats
and
his
Grecian
urn,
the "bride" of "time").
Children
play
under
its
branches,
and
their
games
establish
an
associative
link
between
comfort,
the
domestic,
and
nature.
Such
games—tree-climbing
and
apple
gathering—perhaps
domesticate
nature
on
one
level,
but
they
also
expand
human
zones
of
intimacy
to
include "wild" spaces.
Early
childhood
exploration
can
lead
to
an
almost
sacramental
relationship
with
particular
locales,
so
that
these
locales
gain
the
coloring
of
personality,
heavily
invested
with
an
individual's
history.
A
visit
to
a
loved
spot
(like
Wordsworth's "Tintern
Abbey," to
give
but
one
example)
can
become
a
kind
of
ritual,
an
opportunity
for
self-reflection.
The
seeming
permanence
of
the
tree
enables
the
poet
to
form
a
specific
and
intimate
bond—one
steeped
in
his
family's
continuous
history.
The
elm
is "steadfast
to
[its]
home" (line
20),
taking
a
kind
of
ownership
over
the
humans
living
under
it,
even
as
the
humans
take
a
kind
of
affectionate
ownership
over
it.
Its
destruction
thus
makes
Clare's
own
family
more
vulnerable.
As
Jonathan
Bate
writes, "the
elm
tree
is
a
temporal
as
well
as
a
spatial
landmark
[for
Clare].
Because
it
was
there
when
he
was
a
boy,
it
guarantees
the
continuity
of
his
own
life" (174-175).
Clare's
sense
of
loss
at
the
felling
of
the
tree
is
related
to
the
intimacy
of
place;
the
elm
provides
a "seasoned
comfort," which
implies
its
benefits
are
not
ephemeral
(they
remain,
even
with
the
passing
of
seasons);
these
comforts
also
add
a "seasoning" or
texture
to
cottage
life.
The
tree,
in
other
words,
is
inextricably
linked
to
the
poet's
conception
of
home—the
cottage,
the
immediate
fields,
the
Helpston
parish.
As
is
typical
with
Clare,
there
are
no
discrete
boundaries
between
these
different
domestic
spheres:
They
are
all
homes.
Clare's
sense
of
the
domestic
extends
beyond
legal
ownership;
after
all,
to
love
is
to
own,
and
to
be
owned.
The
very
act
of
poetic
composition
is
an
assertion
of
tenancy
and
proprietorship—even
of
the
fields
themselves.
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While
twentieth-century
Americans
might
be tenuously
attached
to
particular
landscapes—feeling,
for instance,
a generalized
but vaguely
nebulous
affection
for the
Missouri
Ozarks or
Glacier
National
Park—it
is much
easier to
feel an
intimate
connection
with a very
particular
local spot,
or, even
more specifically,
a landmark,
like a tree,
a rock outcropping,
a stretch
of lakeshore.
In looking
at "The
Fallen Elm" in
class, an
instructor
will find
it useful
to have
students
inventory
the "domestic" images
occurring
throughout
the
opening
half
of the
poem.
Following
Bate's
suggestion
in The
Song of
the Earth on
how
to read
and
understand "The
Fallen Elm," students
might
be given
a brief
handout
with
quotes
from
Gaston
Bachelard's
evocative
book The
Poetics
of Space,
a philosophical
study
that
explores
how
places
become
personally
significant—invested
with intimacy—to
human beings.
A discussion
of the "poetics
of space," in
Gaston Bachelard's
words, leads
to an analysis
of how landmarks
become invested
with personal
history—how "a
tree" becomes "the
tree," and
even "our
tree." Exploring
selections
from Poetics in
conjunction
with "The
Fallen Elm," students
can be encouraged
to look
at the term "home" in
its
broadest
definitions
to
see
how
particular
places
can
become
so important
to
people.
Questions
about
the
relationship
one
has
with
one's
yard
(and
the
trees
in
it!),
the
neighborhood
stream,
even
a city
and
its
landmarks,
can
help
shed
light
on
Clare's
anger
about
enclosure.
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Class
discussions
can
also
center
around
the
relationship
between
place
and
the
workings
of
the
imagination.
Natural
landmarks,
like
Clare's
elm,
become
associated
with
a sense
of
self,
the
psyche,
even
the
powers
of the
imagination
(a
set
of concerns
common
to Romantic
poetry
in general).
Bachelard
writes
that
beloved
dwelling-places—from
the house
to the shell,
to the tree—are
all suggestive
of protection.
Such spaces
are conducive
to the play
of the imagination.
The "subtle
shadings
of our attachment
for a chosen
spot" reflect
how "we
inhabit
our
vital
space...how
we take
root, day
after
day,
in
a 'corner
of
the
world'" (emphasis
added, 4).
These spaces,
Bachelard
argues,
form how
one views
oneself
in relation
to the larger
world, providing
space for
the oneiric,
the provision
to dream.
Like a tree,
Bachelard
suggests,
humans must
be rooted
to fully
engage this
oneiric
capacity,
so closely
linked to
conceptions
of intimacy
and community.
Within this
framework,
the removal
of a tree
involves
a destruction
of "vital
space" that
encourages
creativity—a
linkage
that
Clare
himself
explores
in
other
poems.
Seen
in
this
light,
enclosure
destroys
the
landscape
and
the
poet.
In this
set
of associations,
the
destruction
of
the
elm
is also
a murder
of
the
human
capacity
to
imagine
and
to create.
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The
significance
of
trees
extends
beyond
the
personal,
or
even—as
in the case
of "The
Fallen Elm"—the
familial;
during a
discussion
of Clare's
poem, students
will quickly
name off
famous trees,
some hundreds
of years
old, and
many that
have tremendous
cultural
significance.
Indeed,
almost every
town has
such a landmark
tree around
which the
community
imaginatively
anchors
itself.
Invariably,
these trees
are linked
to events
in human
history
(battles,
hangings,
treaty signings),
and they
act as living
validators
or witnesses
of commonly
agreed-upon
versions
of the past.
We see just
such a living
landmark
in Clare's
poem "Langley
Bush," which
describes
a tree whose "trunk
is nearly
rotten through" but
that still
evokes memories
of "Langley
Court" (lines
16, 7),
an informal
kind of
courtroom
held under
the tree's
branches.
Here, Clare
makes an
explicit
connection
between
a tree and
judicial
proceedings,
suggesting
that the
rule of
law—and
justice—are
tied to
the preservation
of the land. Unfortunately,
Langley
Bush was
chopped
down, much
to Clare's
regret:
the "old
white thorn
. . . had
stood .
. . full
of fame
. . . the
Gipseys
Shepherds
and Herd
men all
had their
tales of
its history
and it will
be long
ere its
memory is
forgotten" (By
Himself 179).
Clare
here
suggests
that
trees
like
Langley
Bush,
and
indeed,
groves
and
forests,
belong
not
just
to those
who
own
them
legally,
but
to everyone,
including—and
perhaps
especially—the
rural poor.
In his late
poem, "London
Versus Epping
Forest," the
woods become
a place
of freedom.
Walking
through
the forest,
Clare muses, "I
could not
bear to
see the
tearing
plough /
Root up
and steal
the forest
from the
poor, / But
leave to
freedom
all she
loves untamed /
The forest
walk enjoyed
and loved
by all" (lines
11-14).
John Goodridge
and Kelsey
Thornton
have linked
Clare's
trespass
into the
heavily-wooded
Burghley
Park—where
he
first
read
Thomson's The
Seasons—with
freedom,
imaginative
play, and
the composition
of poetry: "It
was a kind
of Paradise
for him,
representing
pastoral
poetry,
inspiration,
nature,
and the
pleasurable" (91).
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In
addition
to
being
catalysts
for
individual
creativity,
trees
also
are
linked
to
the
formation
of
community
identity.
Kit
Anderson
has
explored
the
cultural
significance
of
woods
and "big
old trees," showing
how "charismatic
megaflora" are "active
participants
in the ongoing
creation
of places
and landscapes" (149):
Over
time,
as trees
acquire
symbolic
meanings,
even
their
images
have
power.
Like
all
good
symbols,
trees
are
multivocal,
giving
them
depth
and
endurance
in
human
societies...
The
live
oaks
of Louisiana,
so
closely
tied
to plantation
culture,
turn
out
to have
a much
more
complex
and
varied
significance
to
people
living
with
them
today.
The "sacred
tree of
the Maya" still
has
an aura
of
mystery,
but
its
protection
in
modern
Guatemala
is
often
linked
to its
legal
status
as the
national
tree.
Depending
on
where
they
grow
and
how
they
are
presented
to
members
of
society,
these
trees
can
become
integral
to
notions
of
home,
nationality,
ruling
powers,
ethnic
identity,
or
region.
(150)
In
exploring "big
old trees" like
ceibas and
live oaks,
Anderson
shows how
it is a
short step
from viewing
trees symbolically
(in one
view, potentially,
a victim
of human
categories
and metaphors)
to granting
them a kind
of autonomy,
worthy of
an ethical
stance typically
only accorded
to sentient
beings.
In "The
Fallen Elm," the
tree has
achieved
this state
of discrete
being, and
Clare recognizes
its right
to exist,
independent
of human
valuations.
As a being
worthy of
ethical
consideration,
the tree's
qualities—its
willingness
to give
protection,
its strength—cannot
be taken
for granted.
The protection
is bestowed,
not accidentally
given (by
virtue of
the elm's
immobility).
In a sense,
Clare's
tree becomes
active in
the lives
of the humans
(thus, it
assumes
in a discrete
way a kind
of ethical
relation
towards
them)—it
is a "domestic
tree," and
this
fact
adds
force
to
Clare's
anger
in the
second
part
of the
poem.
In
short,
the
tree
is
not
merely
a victim
of
human
avarice,
it
is betrayed.
-
The
destruction
of
the
elm
tree
is linked
to the
enclosure
of
the
common
lands.
Even
as
the
tree
must
be cut
down
for
profit,
the
landscape
must
be parceled
out
and
figuratively
chopped
up
(literally "cut" by
the plough).
In "Remembrances," Clare
imagines
enclosure
changing
the face
of the landscape
so that
it becomes
almost unrecognizable
to him: "Enclosure
like a Bonaparte
let not
a thing
remain, /
It levelled
every bush
and tree" (67-68).
In "Lament
of Swordy
Well," the
landscape
is eviscerated: "When
grain got
high the
tasteless
tykes / Grubbed
up trees,
banks and
brushes" (59-60).
In The
Natural
History
of Selborne,
Gilbert
White
describes
the
role
trees
play
in "dispens[ing]
their kindly
never-ceasing
moisture." Trees "imbibe
a great
quantity" of
water, which,
when released, "contribute[s]
much to
pools and
streams" (147).
The chopping
down or "grubbing" of
trees is
prominent
in Clare's
enclosure
poems, and,
following
White's
lead, Clare
shows that
the removal
of vegetation
in "Lament" is
linked to
the desertification
of the commons—the
land itself,
so torn
up, is barely
able to "bid
a mouse
to thrive" (154).
Clare shows
that more
is at stake
in "The
Fallen Elm" than
the loss
of a single
tree. Indeed,
the idea
of home
can be expanded
to include
the entire
Helpston
parish,
enclosed
during the
poet's twenties
and finally
made strange
to him,
a landscape "All
levelled
like a desert
by the never-weary
plough, /
All banished
like the
sun where
that cloud
is passing
now" ("Remembrances," lines
48-49).
II.
The Elm's
Betrayal
and the
Rhetoric
of Freedom
-
Whereas
the
first
part
of "The
Fallen Elm" dwells
elegiacally
on the tree's
strength,
longevity,
and domesticity,
the second
part is
a denouncement
of how it
is "betrayed" by
the men
who cut
it down
(line 28);
appropriately,
the tone
of the poem
changes
from gentle
affection
to righteous
anger. The
nature of
the elm's
betrayal
is complex.
The men
who take
shelter
from the
elements
under the
tree's limbs
are the
same ones
who want
to see it
chopped
down: after
all, the
tree's size
and age
(and hence
its ability
to protect)
make it
profitable
lumber.
This betrayal—so
shocking
for its
ingratitude—is
made possible
by the enclosers' "cant" (line
35),
a type
of
shifty
language
that
employs
the
rhetoric
of
freedom
to
linguistically
reverse
ideas
of right
and
wrong:
Self-interest
saw thee
stand in
freedom's
ways,
So
thy old shadow must a tyrant
be;
Thou'st
heard the knave abusing those
in power,
Bawl
freedom loud and then oppress
the free;
Thou'st
sheltered hypocrites in many
a shower
That
when in power would never
shelter thee;
Thou'st
heard the knave supply his
canting powers
With
wrong's illusions when he
wanted friends,
That
bawled for shelter when he
lived in showers
And
when clouds vanished
made thy shade amends—
With
axe at root he felled thee
to the ground
And
barked of freedom. O I hate
the sound! (lines 39-50)
Here,
the
rhetoric
of
freedom
used
by the
proponents
of
enclosure
turns
Clare's
elm
into
a "tyrant," and
the
shade
that
had
previously
been
protective
becomes
a
threat.
Even
as
a bee
might
be
seen
as
a thief
of
pollen,
or
a weed
a
thief
of
water
and
fertilizer,
the
elm
is
here
reconfigured
as
a transgressor,
one
that
stands
in
the
way
of
more
efficient
agricultural
production.
Its
boughs
intercept
the
sunlight
meant
for
crops;
its
roots
hold
together
the
soil
that
must
be
cut
by
the
plough.
-
The
rhetoric
of
freedom "barked" by
the enclosers
(line 50)
reconfigures
Clare's
elm, then,
from a friendly "domestic
tree" into
a hindrance
to economic
progress.
Clare's
denunciation
of the enclosers
includes
a strong
critique
of how language
can be twisted
to forward
a repressive
social agenda. "Freedom," in
this case,
is narrowly
defined
by "self-interest" and
is closely
tied to
the rights
of private
(rather
than communal)
ownership.
The tree's
right to
exist—and
Clare's
right to
enjoy the
tree's protection,
as well
as its fruit—is
legally
insignificant
in the face
of private
property
rights codified
by parliamentary
enclosure.
However,
Clare's
poem demonstrates
that this
definition
of freedom
is in fact
a kind of
verbal legerdemain
(based on "illusions") "bawled" by "hypocrites," "knave[s]," and "o'erbearing
fools" (lines
46, 47,
43, 41,
55), who
take advantage
of an abstract
word like "freedom" to
pursue their
exploitative
agenda.
The ancientness
of the elm
is contrasted
to the short-term
economic
interests.
A "disciple
unto time" (line
48), the
tree is
a living
reminder
of the power
of customary
rights threatened
by enclosure
and the
privatization
of agricultural
production.
Clare reminds
his reader
that the
elm's removal
is symbolically
linked to
the destruction
of the common
lands and,
by extension,
the freedom
of the rural
poor to
earn their
customary
subsistence
livings.
By exposing
the enclosers "freedom" for
what it
really is,
Clare shows
that it
is a "cant
term of
enslaving
tools / To
wrong another
by the name
of right" (lines
53-54).
-
Tim
Fulford
argues
that
Clare's
elm—like
William
Cowper's Yardley
Oak—is
a powerful
symbol of
the English
constitution:
ancient,
vital, and "capable
of gradual
change as
a growth
of English
soil" (para.
1). As Cowper's "Yardley
Oak" shows,
such trees
are powerfully
evocative
of English
freedom—in
contrast
to perceived
French despotism—and
they are
suggestive
of English
identity
(and, for
Cowper,
personal
identity
as well).
Located
within a
landscape
itself pregnant
with meaning,
landmarks
like Yardley
Oak speak
the "language
of redemption," and
Cowper mourns
the "[d]estruction
of rural
beauty," a
destruction
that "threatens...selfhood." This
loss is "not
just of
a place
of security
but of the
very ground
on which
its ability
to discover
a language
of redemption
depends.
To lose
a familiar
and therefore
meaningful
landscape
is also
to lose
a saving
language," a
language
emerging
from natural
forms and
connected
to freedom
itself (para.
6). For
Cowper,
the destruction
of landscape "becomes
an exemplification
that occurs
when all
linguistic
sources
of moral
reparation
have been
destroyed" (para.
11). Fulford
points out
that Clare's "Fallen
Elm" is
a "narrative
of imprisonment" (para.
15), in
which the
loss of
the tree
is a loss
of a "selfmark" (para.
14)—a
loss of
the poet's
connection
to the land
(and its
national
history)
as well
as his own
personal
identity. "Trapped
in corrupted
languages" (para.
15)—in
the usurping,
counterfeiting
rhetoric
of freedom
and enclosure—Clare's
is "a
kind of
poetry in
which language
is left
on the point
of breakdown
and the
poet at
the end
of madness
rather than
one of sublime
egotism" (para.
16).
-
While
the
tree
itself
is felled,
the
image
of
the
tree—reconstructed
in Clare's
poem—continues
to assert
its power
as a symbol
of common
rights.
Appropriately,
this power
extends
beyond human
language
to one more
universal,
a language
linked to
the natural
world and
not legalistic
jargon or "cant." A
friend
to both
the mavis and
the
poet,
the
elm "owned
a language
by which
hearts are
stirred /
Deeper than
by a feeling
clothed
in word" (lines
31-32).
The music
of the elm—the
sound of
strong winds
as they
blow through
its limbs—overpowers
even Clare's
ability
to describe
it: This
language
is an "anthem" (line
2) to Clare—a
song filled
with significance
and emotion.
The "comforts" the
tree provides "was
never penned" (line
14), indicating
that they
can't be
captured
(or "clothed," or
enclosed)
in words
but also,
perhaps,
that they
are so widely
known that
they don't
need to
be. Like
the English
constitution
itself,
unwritten
but nevertheless
providing
tangible
benefits
to all citizens,
these comforts
are to be
enjoyed
as rights:
not as "clothes," or
adornments,
but positive,
tangible
facts. It
is no mistake
that Clare
links these
customary
rights to
music. A
fiddler
himself,
Clare understood
well the
role of
music at
community
gatherings,
where folk
songs—passed
down through
generations—underscored
the
vital
continuity
of
local
traditions,
given
freely
as
an inheritance,
like
the
common
lands
themselves.
-
Clare
adeptly
critiques
the
rhetoric
of
freedom
in
the
second
half
of "The
Fallen Elm," and
he displays
a sophisticated
understanding
of the relationship
between
language
and power.
In contrast
to the "music-making
elm," which
speaks
of comfort
and
freedom,
the
cant
of
the
enclosers
is
brash
and
enslaving:
Thus
came
enclosure—ruin
was
its
guide
But
freedom's clapping hands enjoyed
the sight
Though
comfort's cottage soon was
thrust aside
And
workhouse prisons raised upon
the site.
E'en
nature's dwellings far
away from men—
The
common heath—became
the spoiler's prey.
.
. .
No
matter—wrong
was right and right
was wrong
And
freedom's bawl was sanction
to the song.
.
. .
As
thou wert served, so would
they overwhelm
In
freedom's name the little
that is mine.
And
there are knaves that brawl
for better laws
And
cant of tyranny in stronger
powers
Who
glut their vile unsatiated
maws
And
freedom's birthright from
the weak devours.
(lines
57-62, 65-66, 69-74)
While
the
elm "murmurs" comfort
and reassurance,
the enclosers
offer only
noise—they
come with "clapping
hands," and "bawl" for
freedom.
Clare is
so effective
here in
evoking
the din
of the "bawl" accompanying
these men
that they
seem to
become little
more than
mouths (not
unlike John
Milton's "blind
mouths" in "Lycidas"?)—"vile
unsatiated
maws." They
literally
eat up the "birthright" of
the rural
poor, "freedom," which
is
so closely
linked
to access
to the
commons.
Such
access
was
crucial,
since
the
common
lands
were
used
for
raising
crops,
grazing
livestock,
and
foraging
(nutritious
foodstuffs,
as
well
as
herbs
for
folk
medicines).
With
restricted
access
to such
lands,
Clare
shows
that
his
neighbors
will
literally
eat
less.
The
elm
tree,
the
most
visible
guardian
of
these
freedoms,
is
only
an
initial
sacrifice.
-
Once
the tree
has gone,
the cottage
must
go next;
in its
place
will come
the workhouse,
the
erection
of
which
will
complete
the
disenfranchisement
of
the
Helpston
locals.
Of
the
workhouse
itself,
little
needs
be
said.
In
1844,
Friedrich
Engels
writes
that "these
workhouses,
or as the
people call
them, Poor
Law Bastilles,
is such
as to frighten
away everyone
who has
the slightest
prospect
of life
without
this form
of public
charity." They
are the "most
repulsive
residence
which the
refined
ingenuity
of a Malthusian
can invent," not
much different
than a "jail," and
perhaps
worse (284).
Clare's
writings
make similar
comparisons
between
workhouses
and the
loss of
freedom.
A victim
of enclosure,
the personified
wetland
Swordy Well "speaks
for all
who have
been forced
'onto the
parish'" (Lucas
38) and
into "Pride's
workhouse" ("Lament" line
77). The "workhouse
prisons" in "The
Fallen Elm" replace
the open
fields where
(in another
poem) "unbounded
freedom
ruled the
wandering
scene" ("The
Moors" line
7). The
image of
the "domestic
tree"—linked
in the first
half of
Clare's
poem to
the comforts
of home
as well
as the beneficence
of nature—is
displaced
by an institutional
dwelling
place most
undomestic,
where husbands
and wives
could be
separated
from each
other and,
in some
cases, children
could be
separated
from parents.
The cant
of freedom,
used by
the enclosers
in the second
half of "The
Fallen Elm" is
instrumental,
Clare asserts,
in enslaving
the poor.
In demanding
their right
to own and
use private
property
without
restriction,
these men
overturn
the inherited
rights of
the rural
laboring
class to
common lands,
which are "starving,
exhausted
and overworked" like
the
workers
themselves
(Sales
57).
-
In
the end,
Clare's
poem becomes
a linguistic
assertion
denying
the enclosers
a complete
victory:
the elm
figuratively
remains.
In class
discussions,
students
might be
asked what
Clare is
trying to
suggest
about the
power of
his poetry
versus the
rhetoric
of freedom
he denounces.
It is intriguing
that Clare
emphasizes
the binary
oppositions
such rhetoric
seeks to
deploy (as
in George
Orwell's 1984):
right
becomes
wrong,
and
wrong
becomes
right;
freedom
becomes
slavery,
and
vice
versa.
The
instructor
who
is not
afraid
of inviting
controversy
might
push
the
issue
to
explore
how
contemporary
world
events—the
economic
politics
of globalization,
for instance—involve
the manipulation
of language
to achieve
unjust ends.
What exactly
is "free
trade," and
whom does
it make
more free?
What is
the relationship
of free
markets
to the impoverishment
of Third
World nations?
What comparisons
can be drawn
between
the agricultural
revolution
in Clare's
time and
the "Green
Revolution" of
the
1960s
and
1970s?
While
these
questions
might
be a
little
open-ended,
they
enable
students
to
make
connections
between
Clare's
own
seemingly
distant
set
of concerns
and
pressing
issues
of the
contemporary
moment.
Conclusion
-
John
Clare
writes, "[A]ll
my favourite
places have
met with
misfortunes" (By
Himself 41).
These
loved
spots—known
by the poet
since boyhood—have
incalculable
value; their
enclosure
heralds
the destruction
of traditional
ways of
life and
of community
history
and identity
(not to
mention
individual
personal
identity).
Home and
self, Clare
suggests,
are one
and the
same thing;
remove birds,
weeds, and
butterflies "from
their homes /
Each beautious
thing a
withered
thought
becomes, /
Association
fades and
like a dream; /
They are
but shadows
of the things
they seem" (lines
147-150).
The loss
of the elm
tree is
a highly
personal
one to Clare;
once venerable,
it becomes
expendable
in the face
of so-called
progress.
However,
Clare's
poem exposes
the rhetoric
of those
who would
chop down
the elm
tree as
hollow cant.
The freedom
they claim
to champion
is in fact
little more
than outright
theft, an
appropriation
of the land
and language
(and, therefore,
a type of
counterfeiting).
Their "right" to
chop down
the elm
tramples
on the rights
of the tree
(which Clare
asserts
as legitimate),
as well
as the right
of the poet's
family to
survive,
since the
tree provided
protection
and comfort
to them.
The destruction
of the elm—and
the enclosure
of the Helpston
landscape—thus
becomes
analogous
to an attack
on the laborers
and denizens
of the town,
and the "freedom" of
the
wealthy
landowners
derives from the
enslavement
of
the
rural
poor.
Postscript
on the
Rhetoric
of Freedom
-
Clare's
denouncement
of
the
rhetoric
of
freedom
still
has
much
relevance
to
the
contemporary
environmental
movement,
and "The
Fallen Elm" is
valuable
in the classroom
as a starting
point to
explore
how language
can be used
to frame
the debate
between "developers," "conservationists," and "preservationists." The
enclosers
in Clare's
poem "bawl" freedom
in the service
of agricultural "development," though
Clare himself
describes
freedom
in terms
of preservation—keeping
the
common
lands
unenclosed
and
available
for
the
rural
poor
to
use.
Clare's
use
of the
term
is bound
up in
several
assumptions:
that
freedom
is
related
to
the
land
itself
(not
simply
codified
by
written
laws);
that
everyone
has
the
right
to access
this
land
to earn
a livelihood;
that
the
privitization
of
land
leads
to social
inequality,
even
slavery
(here
Clare
follows
Rousseau).
- The
rhetoric
of freedom
is still
important
today in
framing
the debate
about how
public
and private
lands can
be developed
and utilized.
In the
1980s and
'90s, in
the United
States,
proponents
of the "wise
use" movement
employed the
idea of "freedom" to
combat perceived
government
over-regulation
of economic
development;
along these
same lines, "wise
use" advocates
attempted
to portray
environmental
legislation
(and environmentalists
themselves!)
as anti-democratic,
even anti-American.
To give but
one example,
the website
Freedom.org
provides a
fascinating
study in "wise
use" ideology,
rhetorically
similar to
the "cant" of
Clare's enclosers
(who equate
privatization
with freedom
and common
ownership
with slavery).
One news release
promotes "Freedom
Week" (beginning
July 4th,
1998) and
asserts that
government
regulation
of public
and private
lands is "transforming
America from
the 'land
of the free'
to the home
of the enslaved" ("Freedom
Week Backgrounder").
In order to
maintain freedom,
this document
asserts, the
rights of
private ownership
must be strictly
defended.
Using terms
every bit
as confrontational
as Clare's
enclosers,
the "Freedom
Week" document
refers to
the "enemy" as
those who
hold values
of "sustainability," which
have "pushed
aside the
principles
of personal
responsibility
and individual
freedom." The
idea that "[l]and,
and the resources
it contains,
are assets
held in common
by all people" is "the
enemy," as
are "public
policies such
as the Endangered
Species Act,
[and] the
Ecosystem
Management
policy." "Freedom
Week," the
document asserts,
is a "coordinated
strategic
offensive" (a
kind of ideological
pre-emptive
strike, one
wonders?)
to dismantle
the concept
of "sustainable
development,
or 'biodiversity
enhancement'"—to
assert
the rights
of private
ownership,
even when
the broader
public
welfare
is at risk.
For
Further
Reading,
see also:
- Jonathan
Bate's John
Clare: A biography (Farrar,
Straus, Giroux),
a well-researched
and sensitive
account of
the poet's
life.
- "The
Ecological
Vision of
John Clare" in
James McKusick's Green
Writing (St.
Martins)
- John
Clare in
Context (Cambridge),
a volume
of Clare
essays edited
by Hugh
Haughton,
Adam Phillips,
and Geoffrey
Summerfield
- The
John Clare
webpage,
edited by
Simon Kovesi,
at <www.johnclare.info>.
- John
Clare Society
Webpage,
at<www.johnclare.org.uk>
- The
John Clare
weblog,
at <www.johnclare.blogspot.com>
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